[Writings] Viewfinder

[ariadnem]

char_comet, I finally finished it ^^ Sorry it took me so long, but well...hopefully, you'll like it *cross fingers*

Healing
Fandom: Viewfinder
Characters: Feilong Liu & Mikhail Arbatov
Warnings: Alpha version, which means, it's not proofread ^^U
Disclaimer: The Viewfinder series belong to Ms. Yamane. All the rights and credits are hers and I'm just having fun imagining what ifs related to the story.

Comments

[char-comet.livejournal.com]

Ohhh Ariadne thank you so much for this gift of yours ^_______^
It's such a lovely piece and I liked the fact that you keep it related to the real story in the manga.
But you didn't have to stop it like this...
I know that one needs time to think and write the right things but please give this a sequel ^__-
Thank you so much for your effort. I appreciated it very much.

[priestess-grrrl.livejournal.com]

ooh, that was really good! GAH, I so want to know what is going to happen in the canon! I wonder if Fei really does care about Mika, or anyone. He's so damned screwed up, hence why we love him so much...! Lovely imagery, darling.

[linen-straps.livejournal.com]

Hi there! ^_^
I just stumbled upon your beautiful litte piece of writing at hail_mik and wasn't sure at first where to comment. But as there are already comments here, I thought I'll add my two cents, too.

I loved it. The atmosphere you created, a feeling of calm and tranquility. Providing a basis for healing in more ways than only physically. You know, I can really imagine this scene to happen. There's a lot on Fei's mind lately, first the changes Aki caused in him, resulting in him treating Aki differently, even releasing him. Then NT 13, a confrontation not only with Asami, but also with his self.

The Feilong in your story is a Feilong who managed to cope with his own past and is able to move on... possibly in baby steps - but it's always the small steps that add up to a quantum leap, isn't it?

It's not a love story - yet. ;) But it's a promising beginning. As you wrote in the end: for now, heal. Take care of the rest later. :)

So, I wanted to say thank you, not only for writing this little gem and presenting char_comet with such a wonderful gift, but to give us fellow fangirls lurking in the shadows the chance to enjoy it also. And I enjoyed it tremendously! :D

Take care! ^__^