100 Ficlets (04-08)

[ariadnem]

Prompts en Español aquí

Bueno, seguí con estos

Prompt: 04. Interior (es)
Palabras: 186
Personaje(s): Maestros dorados y sus aprendices (actuales santos)
04. Interior(es)

Prompt: 05. Exterior (es)
Palabras: 155
Personaje(s): Aioria y Aioros
05. Exterior(es)

Prompt: 06. Horas
Palabras: 222
Personaje(s): Kanon
06. Horas

Prompt: 07. Días
Palabras: 176
Personaje(s): Ninguno en Particular
07. Días

Prompt: 08. Semanas
Palabras: 224
Personaje(s):Phoebe, Maestra de Cáncer; Selek, Maestro de Escorpio y Charles, Maestro de Piscis.  (estos personajes son de mi creación.)
08. Semanas.

Comments

[darkkia.livejournal.com]

Ari como siempre tus escritos me encantaron, sobre todo los 3 primeros...^.^

a veces se me ocurren unas frases o medio escrito imaginado, pero no tengo alcance de una libreta o algo para q no se me vaya el musito...xD LoL

be carefully!

[ariadnem.livejournal.com]

Pues nena, te tocó conseguir una libretita para llevarla contigo a todos lados ^o^

Gracias por lo que me dices!!!!!

[muinteor.livejournal.com]

What can I say, Marge? Wonderful falls short.

In each of these little tales you have captured a moment, its mood and essence, and you immerse the reader in it, all in the moment it takes to read.

I’ll never get tired of saying it, but you have a gift for words. Of course you are a storyteller.

In “Interior”, you describe meditation, that discipline I’ll only be able to imagine and never experience, in a way that really convinces me, one-with-the-world. Do you meditate?

In “Exterior” you invoke what are for me childhood memories of those long early-seventies Irish Summers (yes, it’s true, it doesn’t always rain in Ireland!), when it was bright at 5 am, and still bright at 11 pm, and a day at the seaside was a magical day. This one really made me smile. I imagine that the Aegean was nicer to swim in than the Irish Sea...

In “Horas” you invoke the passing of time by counting the seconds at the beginning and end of the piece, and in between you evoke one of my favourite books, “Alice in Wonderland”, and yes, you are right. Kanon falling down to the kingdom of Poseidon is just like Alice falling down the rabbit hole. What an astute observation. I was also reminded of “The Count of Montecristo”, when the character is trapped in that prison by the sea, Chateau D’If. The insaciable thirst for vengeance of the character in the novel and his determination to escape came back to me reading this piece. All this in 222 words?

In “Días” you describe the desire to escape from an indoctrination that makes Sanctuary seem like a scary place to be brought up in. Of course, the Saints were all born and raised to some extent in other lands, but they were all taken to Sanctuary and underwent terrible ordeals at the hands of their masters. Cruelty seems to be the norm among Athena’s minions, seperating children from their loved-ones and turning them into fighting machines... and I thought Athena was good...

In “Semanas” you remind us who is writing this, by inserting some characters of your own design, which I love. I know Phoebe and Selek from other works of yours. Now Charles. I wonder about that “recelo” and am sure you’ll be filling us in on that in the future. I really love these tie-ins. For me Selek is already a well-known character, and when Phoebe says “A Selek? Jamás, Charles. De eso estoy segura.” I could only smile, and think “Phoebe’s right” and wonder if you’’ll be telling more about those missions.

The drabble is a great tool for story telling, and you use it so well, my friend. So 92 more to go? Autumn is going to be an interesting season this year.

Grá mór, mo chroí.

[ariadnem.livejournal.com]

I think I won't leave the comments enabled here, so that you all go and comment below the story itself XD

I love what you just wrote to me, Joe. Thank you so much for this. You always showed me a side of my stories I wasn't aware of. Thank you os much, mo cara.

I can't help it but use the characters I've created ^^ Have I told you I have new ideas for Athena's Saints? but well, just like with Eyes, I have to start rewriting most of it.

92 to go...wow, will I be able to finish those?

*faints*

Grá mór.

[ghaidin.livejournal.com]

mis favoritos, el de Kanon no sabiendo q tiene un hermano, Aioria todo enfadado porque su hermano no le hace caso y el del trainee que se escapa *dolor*

Aishhh, cuanta angustia!

[ariadnem.livejournal.com]

Hahahaha, creo que me sale escribir angst XD

Gracias nena ^^

*smooches*

[undertheice.livejournal.com]

Leer tus historias en español siempre me da una sensacion distinta que leer las tuyas en ingles. Como mas cercania, mas... No se, pero si que es agradable. Lo cual no significa que tus historias en ingles no me gusten. De hecho, me encantan igual. Solo que de manera distinta.

#04 me encanta. La union con el cosmo y el universo, todos al mismo tiempo haciendo lo mismo... Es hermoso.

#05 Aioria y Aioros juntos! *_* Me encanta eso de Kitten siendo tan altanero y honesto. Pobre Aioros que tiene que controlar a esa fiera. ;)

#06 Kanon esperando con tanta paciencia el momento adecuado me mata. Es tan, no se, el!

#07 es uno de esos golpes directos al estomago que tanto me gustan en las historias. ;P

#08 me gusta porque es la muestra perfecta de los lazos que unen a los caballeros.

Me encantaron todos. Que ganas de leer los que siguen!

[ariadnem.livejournal.com]

Sentí la necesidad de hacerlos en español. Y tienes razón, la sensación es más cercana. Me los estoy disfrutando mucho ^^

Gracias por tomarte el tiempo y leerlo.

*smooches*

[scorpioyue.livejournal.com]

Had read Comienzo the first time you posted it but before I could comment, it disappeared. I think it remains my favorite, together with 03 and 05.

I'm pretty sure you'll be able to cover all prompts. *cheers* :)

[ariadnem.livejournal.com]

Disappeared O.O

Thank you ^^