So the SeSa season is over, and in 2008 I only participated on those for Saint Seiya and in the on that we've been doing over at Runya for three years.
I had
cygny (and believe me, it was pure luck), yet the prompt became hard on me. Writing Bud ain't easy for me for he was Kitten's trademark character, and well, I get over-emotional when it comes to Bud and all that. Ask
milosflaca and
muinteor . There were times when I thought I couldn't write the story, for not even the plot was there, but I managed. So...
cygny requested Bud and Syd and no yaoi, which was fine for me, and so I wrote A Tale of Brotherhood Told in Ten Acts
I have to say that I wish I'd written more of it; but I'd run out of time and my skill writing in English has got worse than it used to be *cry* Still, she liked it!!!! YAY!!!! and when she asked for more, I couldn't help myself and ended up writing another little piece for the twins' parents, and ended up writing what you'll see behind the cut. I've already sent it to her when I responded about the feedback she sent, and well...while I put all this on Labrys, I guess I can just paste it here ^^U
What parents wouldn't recognise their own children?
Both ran to the door and opened it. Althea remained in the threshold waiting. Virn on the other hand, walked outside, despite the snow falling and the fact that the man refused to hand in the body.
"My son…" Virn said the words slowly, as his throat filled with grief and the words were cut at once. Bud couldn't stop crying; besides he didn't need to hide his own pain.
"Virn!" Althea's voice made them realise she was also waiting. Bud's heart was a turmoil, for he wasn't expecting his parents to mourn, but then, it wasn't the first son they'd lost.
"Mother…" It was his time to speak and also the time for his words to not be able to come out freely, as they were supposed to. Finally after closing the door, Virn came closer and took the body from Bud's reluctant arms. He didn't want to let go, yet he allowed Virn to walk away with Syd's body.
Althea hugged him. His mother kissed him in the forehead and the cheeks. She grabbed him by the arms and walked to the hearth of the house. He was back, Bud heard her saying as she walked away to bring him something warm to drink.
It was time for mourning the loss of their son within the House of Zetha, and also for thanking Odin for having brought back their long lost son.
I got a piece of a story of mine. I told my recipient that I wanted a scene with Milo and an OC of mine, Selek.
lady_hook who was my SeSa, drew this for me. It's a page with panels of Selek and Milo before Milo's parents grave (I guess if you haven't read "Milo, Son of Alesandros--and of Selek won't have any idea what I'm talking about...please forgive me! *puppy eyes*) Lucky me, she knows that story as well as I do, and I couldn't have been any happier. Thanks Icy.
*language swap*
Para el SeSa en español (ambos de hecho O.o) me tocó
hyocam . Pero, como esto es sobre Saint Seiya, el de Runya lo dejo para después.
Hyo pidió Deathmask & Aioria. Tengo que admitir que desde un principio dije que no iba a escribir lemon explícito. No es que me choque la pareja...es que no tenía motivación para escribirla. SIn embargo, me divertí mucho haciéndola, porque traté de ocultar lo que la gente llama "mi estilo" pero bah, de nada sirvió :P Aunque insisto, es tan distinto a lo que usualmente hago, que me gustó mucho darle ese giro. (Aunque no era la primer vez que usaba un narrador así, lo admito)
En fin, que para ella hice Eclipse de Sol, Eclipse de Luna.
Por mi parte, pedí a Shaina y Milo. No pedí romance, sino buena interacción entre ellos, y tengo que decir que quedé con ganas de más! (alguien que me haga el favorcito y me de otro poquito de estos dos...porfis, porfis, porfffiiiiisss???) Qué puedo decir, Nande se jaló una historia estupenda, que me dejó superenganchada. Repito: ¡quiero más! (ya parezco comercial de Tang :P)
Ella escribió Día de Entrenamiento. Es en serio...no hay un alma caritativa por ahí que se apiade de estos pechos y le regale algo con estos dos? (sí, ya sé que no es mi cumpleaños ¬¬ *grumble* pero prometo no pedir nada de nuevo por un tiempo...*cruza los dedo detrás de la espalda*)
*back into English*
Now, I better go to bed. I have to travel to Sincelejo tomorrow. Will be back home on Friday, still...well, I'm sleepy now.
I had
I have to say that I wish I'd written more of it; but I'd run out of time and my skill writing in English has got worse than it used to be *cry* Still, she liked it!!!! YAY!!!! and when she asked for more, I couldn't help myself and ended up writing another little piece for the twins' parents, and ended up writing what you'll see behind the cut. I've already sent it to her when I responded about the feedback she sent, and well...while I put all this on Labrys, I guess I can just paste it here ^^U
Faðir eða móðir
What parents wouldn't recognise their own children?
Both ran to the door and opened it. Althea remained in the threshold waiting. Virn on the other hand, walked outside, despite the snow falling and the fact that the man refused to hand in the body.
"My son…" Virn said the words slowly, as his throat filled with grief and the words were cut at once. Bud couldn't stop crying; besides he didn't need to hide his own pain.
"Virn!" Althea's voice made them realise she was also waiting. Bud's heart was a turmoil, for he wasn't expecting his parents to mourn, but then, it wasn't the first son they'd lost.
"Mother…" It was his time to speak and also the time for his words to not be able to come out freely, as they were supposed to. Finally after closing the door, Virn came closer and took the body from Bud's reluctant arms. He didn't want to let go, yet he allowed Virn to walk away with Syd's body.
Althea hugged him. His mother kissed him in the forehead and the cheeks. She grabbed him by the arms and walked to the hearth of the house. He was back, Bud heard her saying as she walked away to bring him something warm to drink.
It was time for mourning the loss of their son within the House of Zetha, and also for thanking Odin for having brought back their long lost son.
I got a piece of a story of mine. I told my recipient that I wanted a scene with Milo and an OC of mine, Selek.
*language swap*
Para el SeSa en español (ambos de hecho O.o) me tocó
Hyo pidió Deathmask & Aioria. Tengo que admitir que desde un principio dije que no iba a escribir lemon explícito. No es que me choque la pareja...es que no tenía motivación para escribirla. SIn embargo, me divertí mucho haciéndola, porque traté de ocultar lo que la gente llama "mi estilo" pero bah, de nada sirvió :P Aunque insisto, es tan distinto a lo que usualmente hago, que me gustó mucho darle ese giro. (Aunque no era la primer vez que usaba un narrador así, lo admito)
En fin, que para ella hice Eclipse de Sol, Eclipse de Luna.
Por mi parte, pedí a Shaina y Milo. No pedí romance, sino buena interacción entre ellos, y tengo que decir que quedé con ganas de más! (alguien que me haga el favorcito y me de otro poquito de estos dos...porfis, porfis, porfffiiiiisss???) Qué puedo decir, Nande se jaló una historia estupenda, que me dejó superenganchada. Repito: ¡quiero más! (ya parezco comercial de Tang :P)
Ella escribió Día de Entrenamiento. Es en serio...no hay un alma caritativa por ahí que se apiade de estos pechos y le regale algo con estos dos? (sí, ya sé que no es mi cumpleaños ¬¬ *grumble* pero prometo no pedir nada de nuevo por un tiempo...*cruza los dedo detrás de la espalda*)
*back into English*
Now, I better go to bed. I have to travel to Sincelejo tomorrow. Will be back home on Friday, still...well, I'm sleepy now.
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Date: 2009-01-21 07:23 pm (UTC)I'm so happy you liked it *blush*
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Date: 2009-01-22 05:03 pm (UTC)no subject
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