Finally!!!

[ariadnem]

Ok, this story was born here, a X-mas present for shadow_arashi, then, and without me counting on it, it continued here, with my Site's 1000 visitor Kiriban, which was for sagakure; and well, I tried to make it the Gemini Festival for this year, but I just finished it, after many paths in its evolution, where it became a b-day present for Shadow and Sagakure since it began with stories for them.

Though I'm not sure yet about the ending, Girls, hope you like it.

Warnings:  One, there's a very, very explicit part; and two, it's still on its Alpha version.
Characters: Kanon, Rhadamanthys and Saga.
Content: Yaoi and kinkiness lie ahead

Light and Dark

*Ari waves, eagerly waiting for a reaction*

Comments

[shadow-arashi.livejournal.com]

Aaawwwww~~~! =@.@=

I remember that story, I read the first part back when you first post it on your site. I love it SO much!

Very nice, well written and in character. *is in Heaven*

I like all the ficlets but Light and Dark is really a jewel~~!

[sagakure.livejournal.com]

Yay! ^__^/ I like how it turned out, especially for Kanon. Sad for Saga but yay for Kanon & Rhada solving out their problems!

By having forced Kanon to face his past, he had granted them their future.

I think that line was very good to explain the problem and its solution, and why their relationship could evolve thanks to that confrontation! It is after all, a true thing for all relatioships, that one can't move on if he's still stuck in the past. :)

[milosflaca.livejournal.com]

hey! hi!, um.... wouldn't you be intereted in participating on a fan art challenge?
I posted dirty little details on the saint seiya community.

[sagakure.livejournal.com]

Thank you for the offer, but nope, sorry. Also I'm already member of fanfic100, sister community of fanart100, so I'm already doing the same prompt table in the community anyway. ^^/

[muinteor.livejournal.com]

Light and Dark is a great achievement, my friend, and you have evoked a mood of bright and dark moments, and set your stage in Paris, rightly called the city of light. I love the way you’ve developed the tale, with their pasts coming back to haunt the characters, and threaten their newfound happiness. Light for the future, and dark for the past, but the future depends on your characters’ decisions, which they take passionately.

I especially love this quote...

“We’re everything but light, Kanon.”

“Precisely.”

Creatures of the Dark in the City of Light. It’s perfect.

Great begining, great plot development, and a great ending. Wonderful! Your talent really shines through here. Brilliant work, Marge.

[milosflaca.livejournal.com]

Oye linda, estoy viendo que estas posteando ya diaro (valgame!, yo fui a alborotarte con la comunidad y no he posteado casi nada)
cuando quieres que yo postee?
o como nos ponemos de acuerdo.
Mira no puedo conectarme diario, la verdad. Pero podriamos repartirnos los dias ¿como vez?
Estaba pensando que los fines de semana los pasaramos por alto.
Pero no se lo que tu opines :)
hazme saberlo, porque me da pena (insisto) que todavia que fui a alborotarte yo para pedirte que me ayudaras, seas tu la que termines haciendo todo el trabajo *blushes*

[ariadnem.livejournal.com]

Nena, primero desocupate de lo tuyo y ya luego nos organizamos. Yo no tengo ningún problema en seguir posteando a diario, así que por eso no te preocupes.

Apenas estés libre, hacemos lo que quieras, ok?

[scorpioyue.livejournal.com]

I liked very much that last scene about the pets. It was quite sweet~ ^^ I still feel bad for Saga, though. ;_;