Finally!!!

[ariadnem]

Ok, this story was born here, a X-mas present for shadow_arashi, then, and without me counting on it, it continued here, with my Site's 1000 visitor Kiriban, which was for sagakure; and well, I tried to make it the Gemini Festival for this year, but I just finished it, after many paths in its evolution, where it became a b-day present for Shadow and Sagakure since it began with stories for them.

Though I'm not sure yet about the ending, Girls, hope you like it.

Warnings:  One, there's a very, very explicit part; and two, it's still on its Alpha version.
Characters: Kanon, Rhadamanthys and Saga.
Content: Yaoi and kinkiness lie ahead

Light and Dark

*Ari waves, eagerly waiting for a reaction*

Comments

[muinteor.livejournal.com]

Light and Dark is a great achievement, my friend, and you have evoked a mood of bright and dark moments, and set your stage in Paris, rightly called the city of light. I love the way you’ve developed the tale, with their pasts coming back to haunt the characters, and threaten their newfound happiness. Light for the future, and dark for the past, but the future depends on your characters’ decisions, which they take passionately.

I especially love this quote...

“We’re everything but light, Kanon.”

“Precisely.”

Creatures of the Dark in the City of Light. It’s perfect.

Great begining, great plot development, and a great ending. Wonderful! Your talent really shines through here. Brilliant work, Marge.